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Discussion in 'Suggestions' started by WafDan, Oct 18, 2015.

  1. WafDan

    WafDan Member Staff Member Retired

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    We have recently added a new page called "Documents" this will tell you how to play on each server, but we may have grammatical errors that we have yet to notice.
    If you want to help us fix it here's you're chance!

    Here's the link for the documents. https://www.shadowxcraft.net/pages/documentation/


    Poor Grammar?
    Do you think the color is off? Did we not cover a command or feature?
    Suggest it here!
     
  2. KurtTheFruit

    KurtTheFruit Builder Staff Member Builder

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    Hub is a place where you first login, it allows you to do fun things. This includes Parkour, Flappy Bird, and chat with friends. You can also step on the Gold Pressure Plates so that you can go to your destination faster, There are portals you can go to visit different servers. The Hub was created by The Owner lizardfreak321.

    1. "Hub is a place where you first login" <- I think this should be removed because unnecessary.
    2. This includes Parkour, Flappy Bird, and chat with friends. <- Remove "and chat with friends" since the sentence talks about minigames. Change it to "This includes different activities like chatting with friends, playing Parkour, and playing Flappy Bird.
    3. You can also step on the Gold Pressure Plates so that you can go to your destination faster, There are portals you can go to visit different servers. <- The comma should be replaced with a period, the sentences are talking about different topics.
    4. The Hub was created by The Owner lizardfreak321. <- Improper capitalization of words, I think you should change it to "This hub was created by the owner, lizardfreak321.

    We are planning on making a new Hub soon, so please be patient! There's a threads were you can suggest onto the new Hub! Click Me For the First Link, and Click me for the Second Link!

    1. There's a threads were you can suggest onto the new Hub! <- Correct the grammar, it should be "There are threads wh ere you can give ideas for the building of the new hub!
    2. Click Me For the First Link, and Click me for the Second Link! -> Replace this sentence with "Click me for the first link, and me for the second link!"
    3. If you have any problems with Hub. Please contact @lizardfreak321 -> Change this to "If you have any problems with the Hub, contact @lizardfreak321."
    4. CORRECTIONS:
    Minecraft Factions is a gamemode where you must learn how to team up with friends and create your very own group or " Faction " and as a team, you attempt to raid and take down other factions on your quest to becoming the strongest and richest players on the server. (TheCampingRusher's Factions Definition)

    Basics

    Spawners

    You can mine monster spawners with pickaxes that have silk touch!
    Shop
    To buy/sell items do /warp shop, then right click the item frames!
    Warning
    CombatLog is enabled in this server! Logging out in combat will kill you!
    Raiding
    Raiding requires different tactics in order to destroy an enemy base, explosions can destroy obsidian!
    McMmo
    Mcmmo is a RPG type of plugin in where you get levels for doing specific tasks! It adds different abiltiies in the Factions world. Every time you level up a skill, you get more powerful!
    Bounty
    Bounty is a plugin in where you can set bounties on people, whoever kills the person who has a bounty on him is rewarded with money.
    TnT Sweep
    TnT Sweep is a plugin where the TnT clears after a restart. Anything that was about to explode will disappear.

    _______________
    Note: These are just 2 servers, I'll try to correct more soon. Correct me if I'm wrong with some sentences though :) .
     
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  3. ShadowXRemember

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    YOLO PPL
     
  4. X1X_

    X1X_ Helper Staff Member Developer

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    KitPvP
    "To get a kit, right click the sign! Just remember, we do have a combat logging plugin. If you combat log you loose $5."

    "Loose" is spelt incorrectly. "Lose" is the correct verb in this context. "Loose" is used as an adjective, e.g. "This rope is loose!"


    "Lose" instead of "Loose" in the KitPvP introduction paragraph.

    Hunger Games
    "Death match lets the players join into a small arena so that they can kill each other faster. Death match has a smaller arena."

    "Death match" is one word; this is used in a game context, so "Deathmatch" is technically grammatically MORE correct than "Death match".


    "Deathmatch" instead of "Death match" in the Hunger Games introduction paragraph.


    "To see your can member list: /clan roster"
    "To see your clans Bulletin board: /clan bb"

    "Can", I presume, is supposed to be "Clan", so this is a spelling mistake.
    "Clans" is referring to a possessive noun, which shows ownership and/or membership in the clan. "Clan's" is the correct context in which it should be used in this annotation of a command (the apostrophe represents either a possessive noun OR a omissive noun, e.g. "don't"; the apostrophe represents the "o" in "not", "Do not").


     
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    "Bounty is a plugin in where you can set bounties on people, whoever kills the person who has a bounty on him is rewarded with money."

    The comma which you have used is not correct for this context. A semi-colon (;) should be used in place, as a semi-colon is placed within a complex sentence to join two, maybe three unrelated sentences/phrases; e.g. "Using a semi-colon isn't hard; I once saw a gorilla do it!" (taken from http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon, I do not own this website and therefore third party accusations are rendered useless in this context).
     
  6. ShadowXRemember

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    sorry to interrupt ppl
     
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